This is part of the “I LOVE YOUR POEM!” series, in which people submit on behalf of local poets whose work they admire and write about why they do. The idea is not only to highlight great work, especially from those who may not submit the work themselves, but also to create a big gushy lovefest in the community. If you’re interested in submitting on behalf of a local poet you love you can check out the submission guidelines here.
I love Shana Lara’s “Bus Poems.” Like Frank O’Hara’s Lunch Poems they raise the level of the everyday to the glorious and effervescent, the best thing a poem can do. What else could I say? When she speaks of biting her lip you can taste the blood. This poem speaks for itself.
31 Mar 2023 Once you bite yr lip The blood drawn Swells for a week The way love is A cold night but the kind You embrace Hold it like the coming Waking up to a loud world Forgetting to drink enough water Running errands for someone else The hangover from failures of past The man in the parking lot nearly topples over the shopping cart corral W/ child in his arms She cries at fresh bruises The shock of nearly being dropped from security Late afternoon Some cars have more dust than others When last did you last check yr oil? A woman in her 50's draped a Pashmina scarf across her body Over a white linen dress There's much dust in the air Hard card wheels rattle in a loud world Engine idles Fresh landscaping A gentleman carrying 3 green apples 12 tomatoes His phone rings from his pocket Set on standard classic landline bell He takes the call in time Puts in reverse Woman walks her long haired Black dog As the crow flies over consorting w/ the raven 8am isn't early for those who sleep at night 10pm is my noon New York accent says he sees the grandparents playing a larger role in the kids lives Walks inside to buy 4 gallons of water Mud on cars wiped clear frm window It's a slow start day like one hugs the end of night Reusable shopping bags The Civic stops For pedestrians but not the sign Have I told you, and how Do you believe-- crane across the sky Optical lolly pop Turn right first on the left Does that sound familiar? Here's yr iron it out Here's yr point of choice Mornin' darlin' Those aren't pancakes Oh boy on empty campus The suede will loosen over time That's just how it wrks Glide onto foothills 3 tiny red flags in the soil flick in the stirring Silent approach Slow dwn @ Valmont & hunger growls It felt real, felt a form of precious Does this button hole line up Or are we foolin' w/ uneven seaming If it rips then fix it Until then I've got my eyes counting Every crow baking a sixpence pie Did I turn off the oven Last night broken beige farmhouse Windows of reflected Only when the sun hits at that curved angle Patched asphalt Ride on play that song another go another try are you watching Momentum build God - Shana Lara
Thomas Peters is the owner of the Beat Book Shop (1200 Pearl St, Boulder) and host of the 35-year-running So You’re a Poet reading series (Every Monday 830pm, Wesley Chapel, 1290 Folsom St, Boulder). Books include Certain Birds, 100 Missed Train Stations, and 1985.
Shana Lara is a poet, mystic, and interdimensional-cantaloupe.